romance otaku

Amazing game series. I just wish I wasn't too young to fully enjoy the first game...

I started reading in fifth grade. That addiction evolved to an anime addiction, then both, then writing. At this point I haven't read for a while (minus school stuff), but ...

Usually I go through a story with my bold print red pen and point out all the faults I possibly can and be a total, well, critic. I mark every ...

I stared at her gawking for a moment before she stared at me intently so one stared at the other than the other stared back... sounds a little... choppy, maybe? ...

This is a draft. I need suggestions on the following if possible: - Realism. Is this possible? - Can you relate to Dexter? If so, how? The key to this ...

I think my first story that I wrote was a comic book >< I don't remember much of it but all I know is that I was very poor at ...

Wow, this is amazing. So full of feeling. The writing was great, and i fund no errors. I understood it all (though the true meaning could've been something beyond my ...

Very good. Very good rhythm, even though you diverged from your pattern briefly. I understood what you were saying, and you gave just enough detail to make it real. No ...

And he was dead God, took long enough. XD In all seriousness, pretty epic first sentence . His body lay face up in the mud, his eyes wide, and his ...

Not many fantasy/paranormal fans around here, are there? Oh well... The idea was based around the "Chasing the rainbow in the sky" line. The idea was that it was about ...

I just revised the poem. How is it now?

This is something I wrote in the car on the way to DC to avoid working on my novella. I'm no poet, but I would like some feedback on it ...

This is a draft. I need suggestions on the following if possible: - Realism. Is this possible? - Can you relate to Dexter? If so, how? The key to this ...

My grandma's eyes crinkled as she laughed a sound that rippled off of the walls and filled the room. Her hazel eyes sparkled and she smiled at me, her teeth ...

Thanks so much for your review ^-^. I will try to check out your stuff tomorrow. I am currently working on a report XD.